Dear Lior,
I enjoyed reading your blog. You also at the beginning added some nice pictures. You need to take more care with your spelling, punctuation, contractions and capital letters. You have to get used to using the spell checker! It will improve the level of your writing tremendously. It is important so you learn from the corrections.
Good Job!
Your final grade is 88.
Yours,
Karen Noll Stanger
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